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July 25, 2009
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:iconlish-55:
I would greatly appreciate any suggestions or comments for this piece.
I'm not sure what I think of the background or the smoke, or how I could make them better.
Let me know what ya think.

Btw this is my first full tablet drawing! Yay! :)
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~the-photographicpoet Dec 30, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Hello, Critique coming your way :)

Firstly, the colours are brilliant. I think it's really funky and very relatable for many people on here.

I don't know much about tablet drawing, but I will say that I enjoyed this. You've gone into all the right detail, and you've managed to captivate me with the blueness of her eyes.

Well done.

I would say though to try and focus on making it a more natural picture, but as it is, I love it.

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:iconlish-55:
I'm glad you liked it. I also really like the way her eyes turned out, so I'm glad you noticed them.
I always start out trying to create more natural looking images, but I love bold colours so much I usually end up adding my own style to it, and it doesn't look at all realistic or natural anymore. I like the way this turned out though, especially for being my first drawing done with a tablet.
Thanks so much for your comments.
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~the-photographicpoet Dec 30, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
I love bold colours too lol I want my room in bright colours. I would have this on my wall you know, :)
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:iconlish-55:
Thanks! My room is mostly lime green, but my closet contains every colour of the rainbow! Pretty colours make me happy :)
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*Brokii Jul 25, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I Think You've Done An Exelent Job On This :)
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:iconlish-55:
Thanks so much! I'm pretty happy with it, especially for being my first full drawing done with a tablet, but I still feel like it could be better.
Mostly I think I need a break from it though lol
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